The art is great and I liked the idea of it, but the first story was confusing. They never explained why they were "acting" like lovers in the story, they just were and then they were doing it. There was seemingly no development or anything. The second story was better but I didn't like how the seme forced the uke. He said he was scared. If you care about him, help him through his fears.
The art is great and I liked the idea of it, but the first story was confusing. They never explained why they were "acting" like lovers in the story, they just were and then they were doing it. There was seemingly no development or anything. The second story was better but I didn't like how the seme forced the uke. He said he was scared. If you care about him, help him through his fears.