It’s amazing! A few recommendations I would give us to make the sclera slightly grey and shade it darker at the edges to give the illusion of an sphere. Also, you can watch Proko’s videos about eye structure so you can understand better the planes of the eyelids and shade them accordingly!
https://twitter.com/mriadoesart/status/1365355904665722880?s=19, I just want to get you guy's opinion about it. I WANNA IMPROVE(/TДT)/