Ahh, you're English is fine! And I agree, especially with the romance parts. I would love for the story to focus on Dawna and if there is romance it should be more of a subplot.
I also kind of prefer her and Coal
Thank you(⌒▽⌒). English not my first language, I'm still learning
I definitely agree with the fact that I want this story to focus on dawn and her magic!! I really don’t care about what the ml is or who it may be. After all, not all women NEED a ml!
I agree!
100% agree with this! The story prefaces with Dawn as the focal point and her growth is the story, but lately we've had too many splashes of romance scattered where it doesn't need to be.
The writing really needs to focus on Dawn and her growth over her love life/issues.
*My English pretty bad so mind you guys*
For some reason I want this story focus more of Dawn practice her magic rather than just romance. I mean it's okay for romance but maybe focus more on the character growth and juts put a little romance here and there without making it to obvious.
And I kinda want Dawn endgame with Coal tbh but some of you say that she gonna be with Raphael (or whatever his name is). Even when this probably won't happen I wish Dawn friend (the prof younger sister) end up with Coal
Miss percy (?) Or elle (?) I don't like her one bit. She kinda give me a little yandere vibe like "Stay away from him or you suffer the consequences"
Or maybe I just prefer Prof Eddie didn't end up with anyone (pretty half of people who reading this story had small crush on him)