One thing about this story that is really odd to me are the plot inconsistencies. For example, when the FL and ML were at the dinner table talking about sleeping together (when the FL was on her period) she told him it would be her first time and he was surprised but mentioned that it was at least better than if she had a lot of boyfriends. Later, when they're about to sleep together, she thinking about how she wants to hide that she's inexperienced which is weird because she'd already mentioned that she was inexperienced to him. Another thing is when they were going to go out together for the first time (I think) and she was saying that she didn't think he'd want to be seen outside with her because she thought that he wouldn't want his acquantances or journalist to see them. She also told him that she doesn't care if other people saw them, but didn't she decide not to let her family know about her relationship because she didn't want them to find out? Wouldn't you then be risking being found out if you went out with him like that? What was the point in hiding the relationship from your family then? Another inconsistency was how the FL asked her sister if she had the abortion/ was going to get it and then her sister said no, and then the FL replied with why. And I'm sitting there thinking, uh didn't you go to the hospital with your sister a few chapters ago and were told that no doctor would abort the kid because it's illegal and too far into the pregnancy for an abortion? So many plot inconsistencies. It's like the author sometimes forgets what they wrote.
One thing about this story that is really odd to me are the plot inconsistencies. For example, when the FL and ML were at the dinner table talking about sleeping together (when the FL was on her period) she told him it would be her first time and he was surprised but mentioned that it was at least better than if she had a lot of boyfriends. Later, when they're about to sleep together, she thinking about how she wants to hide that she's inexperienced which is weird because she'd already mentioned that she was inexperienced to him. Another thing is when they were going to go out together for the first time (I think) and she was saying that she didn't think he'd want to be seen outside with her because she thought that he wouldn't want his acquantances or journalist to see them. She also told him that she doesn't care if other people saw them, but didn't she decide not to let her family know about her relationship because she didn't want them to find out? Wouldn't you then be risking being found out if you went out with him like that? What was the point in hiding the relationship from your family then? Another inconsistency was how the FL asked her sister if she had the abortion/ was going to get it and then her sister said no, and then the FL replied with why. And I'm sitting there thinking, uh didn't you go to the hospital with your sister a few chapters ago and were told that no doctor would abort the kid because it's illegal and too far into the pregnancy for an abortion? So many plot inconsistencies. It's like the author sometimes forgets what they wrote.