oh fuck the rest cut off lmao
ok im annoyed that its gone but ill write it again
basically i also think seme is boring
author decided not to write an interesting character and instead used a sexy playboy/bad boy stereotype lmao
the bad boyness was getting annoying
like semes friends would make remarks hes not fuckin as much anymore
or the girl said how many ppl have become useless to him in the past (which somehow didnt raise immediate red flags that seme treats ppl as tissues he can throw away after "use")
also uke is inconsistent, like he'll "help" this random guy but not these random guys? its just like..... now he gains common sense all of a sudden? (and only for that scene lmao)
also seme didnt change at all, he kept being as inconsiderate as before also they have no communication except for the confession scene and their (fictional) relationship will soon (fictionally) cease to exist
i shortened it and there was smthn else but i forgot idk
its 3am oh god
(before i even say anything this is all my personal opinion obv lmao and i dont want to insult the uploader at all i love u )
also TW: i mention the r@pe a lot look out ig
ok sooooo i didnt like it ;-; and i wanted to like it so much too!
beautiful art? cute uke? a weird character quirk (the fucking sister shit lmao)? support systems outside of the main charas relationship?
but likee....
usually if i see rape coming out of nowhere in bl im either indifferent, sad, angry or angrily turned on but here....... it was just "wait what", its not like i hate every single story rape appears in but it is not only a sensitive topic, its also rlly hard to pull of convincingly (it cant be treated like a small insult nor a mass murder yknow) while also not making the reader despise the chatacter.... well imo the author failed in that aspect
the rape was treated so nonchalantly that it felt like it wasnt even smthn that needed to be adressed, uke treats it like "helping"????? the seme?????? and ud think seme, being the one to grow up in normal society and not in sister-knows-best land, would recognise what he did was wrong and apologise right? HAHA NOPE he treats uke like just another hook up which....... makes me wonder if hes done that before bc like