ok it was cute and all but i didnt like the fact that luca was taking advantage of makoto'...

I don’t think that Luca took advantage of him. Makoto seems like an extremely open-minded person, and I don’t think he would be doing this stuff if he didn’t like it from the beginning. Yeah sure Luca kissed him out of the blue but Makoto’s reaction shows that he liked it. It was even him who made the bigger move with the bathing and stuff. Tho I do understand that everything happened quite quickly, I kind of had the same reaction the first time I read it

the bathing thing was totally out of curiosity after seeing a pic of luca's pierced dick ... and luca even took advantage of that by kissing him while getting hard.. as i said he exploited makoto's innocence .. any person who never kissed or had sex would be giving those reaction... and makoto as being too accepting and curious he went with the flow and liked it.. it felt like if it were some girl who came and did those things ,makoto would accept it too.. anyway XD its all just a plot to get the story going .. i just wrote what i thought

Luka and Makoto are the same age and they were both curious. Saying that Luka is "exploited his innocence" makes it sound like he's a child or something. Luka didn't manipulate or force him. Makota accepted Luka's advances cause he wanted to. He knew what he was doing. It seems like a normal relationship between two teenagers to me.

luca has experience.. being same aged has nothing to do with it.. =_= and he obviously exploited mako's innocence.. dont try to sugarcoat it just because its cute.. even though they are same aged luca was mature in many ways,.. and like i said makoto accepted it.. i never said he was forced or manipulated =_=.. please dont twist my words .. and its my opinion.. :/

You didn’t have to say but your words are making it sound that way by saying he exploited his innocence or by saying makoto just went along with it just because like it doesn’t matter if it was his first time if he didn’t like it he would have pushed luca away but he did not and accept of his own will so you saying he exploited his innocence makes no sense#－.－)but whatever as you said it’s your opinion

try reading it again and then reply here.. your reply made no sense.. exploit in its own sense means "make use of" and he did make use of mako's innocence and curiosity at first... and mako accepted it cuz he liked it .. end of discussion... why making a damn debate out of it by arguing here? the amount of stupidity people carries my god !!

Your the only stupid one here but sure ok since you think your correct

woah someone's triggered for no reason XD crackhead traits~~ cant digest other's opinion so had to spit out nonsense bs...
ok boomer whatever lets you sleep at night

Triggered? Just repeated what said since you decided to say people carry stupidity just bc they don’t agree with your dumb ass claim but yea ok whatever people do be weird asf tryna call ppl out

I kinda agree, I felt that the physical relationship came a bit fast, it would be nice if makoto had a little more emotional development. But overall the story was really cute and fluffy, especially with this style of art!!

yes exactly... its cute of course but too fast for me ... i wanted to see their emotional development more than the physical one..
the way people are trying to debate against what i said seems like i said something wrong ... even going as far as misinterpreting what i said ... ╮(￣▽￣)╭ look at the triggered ones not understanding what i actually meant ...lol where did i say makoto was forced or manipulated ?!! XD the amount of immature ppl are raising in this site...

Haha yeah... try not to mind them, no use wasting time fighting with random people on the internet. I really didn’t see that much emotional development, Luca just said he fell in love with Makoto and Makoto seemed ok with it... and Luca says he wants Makoto to return to the village to live with him, but he also said same sex love was forbidden? Then why won’t he consider staying there with Makoto? Just puttin it out there hahaha (=・ω・=)

IKRRR !! the whole i love u thing looked a bit too fast, you dont just fall in love and try to have sex the next day!! and exact same thought came to me... it felt selfish for some reason... but ok whatever :/ its just a story anyway..
no im not gonna waste my time replying to internet losers XD...
hehe.. thanks for putting it out there.. hope no one comes to bite you XD ^_^ <3

Well this is smut ofc the author will focus with sex scene, u are right the story too fast...but i think it's because the author have a limit to make a chapter, idk but every bl manga always have 5-6 chapter manga idk its rule or what....personally i still enjoy it since they are cute and the con-sex was good lol