It is a one-shot so the author can't really develop her crush for a long time
but the author could use a time gap, something like "a few weeks later"...
(I'm not picking a fight, don't know why but everything I write is misunderstood with being aggressive, but it's not the case)
No that is fine and that was a good suggestion
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I hear you there. I think 'love at first sight' or a very short time can happen, but it is what happens in the next few months... years... decades that will determine if it lasts. Attraction (likely what we have in these mangas) can happen instantly, but real love has to be cultivated. They are off to a good start. It will be up to them to deliberately maintain it.
Sorry, I disliked by mistake
But seriously- just how fast and hard are these people gonna fall? The girl from the second story completely forgot her first crush and liked the other guy in all of 3~4 hours. And I'm supposed to believe that's "love"?...Right ╮(￣▽￣)╭. Meanwhile, lip moles are sexy af so I'm with the first MC completely on that one.