I really didn't like the beginning of the story. I love the art and the dialogue/translations are decent. The story itself feels, extremely, superficial. Especially, around 13 chapters in. There are little moments and pieces of dialogue(especially from that team leader) that pull me in; it actually added depth to the story. I'm glad they didn't end up sleeping together. I feel like it would've cheapened the story because it's such a trope and too expected. I hope this keeps up the momentum it's created cause this is something I'd spend money on. (Making this comment at chapter 17).
Aiight so I don't care about Jinha and Hwane no mo. We have Ina and the teamleader as the corresponding peak characters and that's all we need. Just give me a story with them.
I really didn't like the beginning of the story. I love the art and the dialogue/translations are decent. The story itself feels, extremely, superficial. Especially, around 13 chapters in. There are little moments and pieces of dialogue(especially from that team leader) that pull me in; it actually added depth to the story. I'm glad they didn't end up sleeping together. I feel like it would've cheapened the story because it's such a trope and too expected. I hope this keeps up the momentum it's created cause this is something I'd spend money on. (Making this comment at chapter 17).