Spoilers

awwi February 13, 2021 4:33 pm

I just read the latest two updates
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Boy, I'm frustrated. The incubus scene was dragged out way too long. It took up 5 chapters when it shouldn't have been longer than two. And then the author built up this big emotional moment between Nuah and Rix, with Rix going on (internally) about how he wants to tell Nuah everything and how he feels and that he loves him and then he opens his mouth ... and asks him to have sex. They do it but neither of them is really enjoying it and I'm sitting here, feeling emotionally blue-balled. I know the scene isn't over yet but even if he actually ends up confessing (and I'm pretty sure he'll do it sooner rather than later considering how lovey-dovey they look in the preview pictures) that was a very unfortunate place to end the chapter. Might be better to wait another week to read the next update because that's probably going to have a better flow.

Responses
    j :) February 15, 2021 5:47 pm

    emotionally blue balled is a perfect description of how these last ten chapters made me feel