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YuiYui February 13, 2021 9:27 am

As entertaining as the storyline is... wtf is the progression of the plot. It's like we're just getting a summary of everything and it's extremely lacking in flavor. We don't get to connect with the MC or any of the potential love interests or soon-to-be-enthralled friends of the MC--it's all expressed very poorly.

It would have been better if the time skips weren't so severe, it's almost like whoever 'okay-ed' this has a lack of passion or something... THE DEVELOPMENT SUCKS and I feel so disconnected from the story and characters... This would have been such a great story too.... (〜 ̄△ ̄)〜

Responses
    octotooth February 13, 2021 10:44 am

    Ikr the pace is too fast. I've read the novel and it's really good the romance is amazing and the characters are also really loveable. But the manga needs to slow things down. We've already skipped a few years and there's only been 2 chapters

    windupbird February 14, 2021 3:18 am

    The time skips was also in the novel. It actually titles the ages such as (Eight years old, 10 years old) and switches between characters such as J of Hearts, Queen of hearts and so on. There is a fair portion of story before they start school though that has good character development. I’m curious for the manga if they will bother putting in different points of views or it will all be third person. The story might fall apart if it’s not careful enough with that.