I don't know how to explain it or put it into words but the way the author wrote how the story progressed, I guess is werid and fast. I feel like I'm reading all of the plot twist and main parts of the story and not at all what happens in between or what leads up to them. I don't really know how to explain... like where's the story. Where is the struggle and dont get me wrong, I love how everything is going according to plan but it's all just really easy and uneventful, like everything that has happened has happened because cayena's wanted it too happen. I really like how it started off, the idea for the story itself, and obviously the amazing art but I feel like that's all been wasted because in a way everything is being rushed or skipped I guess. Not only that but just how the main coup are falling for each other feels ugh and maybe the translation is wrong but certain dialogs are just unfortunate or don't make sense. The emotional development between characters is especially werid as well although that's partially because if how fast/easy everything is happening for Cayena.
I don't know how to explain it or put it into words but the way the author wrote how the story progressed, I guess is werid and fast. I feel like I'm reading all of the plot twist and main parts of the story and not at all what happens in between or what leads up to them. I don't really know how to explain... like where's the story. Where is the struggle and dont get me wrong, I love how everything is going according to plan but it's all just really easy and uneventful, like everything that has happened has happened because cayena's wanted it too happen. I really like how it started off, the idea for the story itself, and obviously the amazing art but I feel like that's all been wasted because in a way everything is being rushed or skipped I guess. Not only that but just how the main coup are falling for each other feels ugh and maybe the translation is wrong but certain dialogs are just unfortunate or don't make sense. The emotional development between characters is especially werid as well although that's partially because if how fast/easy everything is happening for Cayena.