Uhhhhh...

wontaek February 13, 2021 9:18 am

I don't know how to explain it or put it into words but the way the author wrote how the story progressed, I guess is werid and fast. I feel like I'm reading all of the plot twist and main parts of the story and not at all what happens in between or what leads up to them. I don't really know how to explain... like where's the story. Where is the struggle and dont get me wrong, I love how everything is going according to plan but it's all just really easy and uneventful, like everything that has happened has happened because cayena's wanted it too happen. I really like how it started off, the idea for the story itself, and obviously the amazing art but I feel like that's all been wasted because in a way everything is being rushed or skipped I guess. Not only that but just how the main coup are falling for each other feels ugh and maybe the translation is wrong but certain dialogs are just unfortunate or don't make sense. The emotional development between characters is especially werid as well although that's partially because if how fast/easy everything is happening for Cayena.

Responses
    whitemoon7 February 13, 2021 9:28 am

    bro same, for the scenes with the brother is just sped up? Like one moment he only thought of using her, and now he's a legit a puppy?

    Devingelic February 13, 2021 9:28 am

    Read the novel if you haven't.
    The manga is kinda lacking than the novel..
    They're all psycho I'm telling ya

    Devingelic February 13, 2021 9:31 am

    The manhwa is kinda fast pace like you point out recommend reading it ..

    whitemoon7 February 13, 2021 9:44 am

    ahh got it thx ill def check out the novel bc I do really love this story

    wontaek February 13, 2021 10:58 am
    bro same, for the scenes with the brother is just sped up? Like one moment he only thought of using her, and now he's a legit a puppy? whitemoon7

    I know right like they've barely spent any REAL time together and after her being fake kind to hime like 3 times, all the sudden he's her puppet

    wontaek February 13, 2021 11:00 am
    The manhwa is kinda fast pace like you point out recommend reading it .. Devingelic

    I'm honestly just disappointed I like the story, art, and how everything started off. Just feels like a wasted opportunity

    Devingelic February 13, 2021 11:25 am
    I'm honestly just disappointed I like the story, art, and how everything started off. Just feels like a wasted opportunity wontaek

    Right the art is good...I'm just glad there's a novel..