Uhhhhhh... Did anyone else notice that the story left a lot of unfinished plot lines?

Ichigo January 4, 2016 4:12 am

Uhhhhhh... Did anyone else notice that the story left a lot of unfinished plot lines?

Responses
    kirayani January 4, 2016 8:50 am

    yes, it was too rushed i feel but i still liked it

    Ichigo January 4, 2016 8:55 am
    yes, it was too rushed i feel but i still liked it kirayani

    They briefly mentioned his childhood. There were some pretty serious stuff there. Then, there was the rape. That was reaolved rather quickly... And then there was the boss. He just kinds of floats around the story, not reallyserving a purpose.

    It's enjoyable until you start reading it like a writer...

    kirayani January 4, 2016 12:26 pm
    They briefly mentioned his childhood. There were some pretty serious stuff there. Then, there was the rape. That was reaolved rather quickly... And then there was the boss. He just kinds of floats around the st... Ichigo

    yea, i wanted more of what was going on with what happened when he was younger and the fact that his boss plastered thos poctures of him for everyone to see. i wanted him to at least get mad and do something about it.

    indeed, tbh when i not satisfied i quickly go to my computer and write up my own ending lol. i wish i knew how to draw, too, so that i can do my own stories