Idk what to feel about this one, it has fluff on ML's part, but both leads are poorly writ...

Anonymous February 10, 2021 9:42 pm

Idk what to feel about this one, it has fluff on ML's part, but both leads are poorly written, ML just wants a wife, FL... IDK what she really wants... her indecisiveness/lack of showing on who she wants is what spoils the most

Also is she dumb to belive in the words of a poorly ethic doctor like ML's ex? She knows that woman is trash with suffering people and has little to no ethic as a professional but it doesn't matter bc she is beautiful and sophisticated? GODS NO! if ML slept with her and you married him you would have downgraded HARD

There was no indication of big money being involved which makes the story confusing...
It's nice how ML proposed to have the chores divided and was open to FL keep working on her shop but i really have no idea how to grade this story

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    Kloveschocolate February 11, 2021 9:20 am

    The ML was one of the better husbands than in most Harlequin stories. He was a respectable, modern husband.