sorry im too lazy to read all of this
Yeh I agree with pretty much everything (minus the sexual compatibility being super important thing - I'm ace - though I do think it's important I also think relationships cod go completely without sex but that's just me (〜￣△￣)〜)
BUT ABOUT HIORI I COMPLETELY AGREE.
I think it was selfish of him to force other people into this relationship dynamic thing but I also think that it was super selfish of him do that to take too and I feel like if we were shown more background to the story of HIORI and takes friendship, it would most definitely be manipulative. If even take were to start hanging out with others I feel like he would have most definitely did something really shity that would end with him forcing take to stay in a relationship with him and he has this really weird amount of power of take as well. Like he seems to be able to control what relationships take has, with who, when and how he is around them.
IDK, maybe I'm just being paranoid but he just so shady to me istg.
Damn, I literally agree with you in this one. I honestly preferred Take over Hiroi and thought that the 3p's arrangement/sex is all messed up. I was actually waiting for some kind of realization to happen but, sadly it did not. Well, all ends that ends well is good so i just hope they're happy with the decisions they made. (〜￣△￣)〜
I agree with absolutely everything and I remember reading this along better go saying oh this is kind of weird but whatever and then me reading it the second time before now of course and then being like no and I made a claim just like yours a little bit more messy though because I can articulate some of my thoughts but I agree with the three comments in with you except the top one because I didn’t take the time to read it but yeah like the person said sex doesn’t have to be that important but the whole premise is that Take Legitimately is trying not to be nice not to be more pure and genuine forcibly so he won’t leave the other guy but the bottom he does this because he realizes when he doesn’t want to hurt the other guy but he thinks the other guy the bottom will leave him as well which for a bit maybe but I really do think he’d go back to him
Take I mean of course he go back to him at one point or another or they get together I feel like if they were left in that house by themselves with the other guy just gone for like a couple months they would legitimately develop a really genuine relationship they would feel guilty for time and even break up because of the other guys manipulation but I feel like when he saw him again they would realize shit he’s really manipulative
wait, why did all of the replies to this disappear ??? I was going to answer some of you guys
Wait you can’t see mines anymore WTF I can see it
So I didn't read it all(I'm so sorry I just can't) but I thought the 3 way was gonna break up there for a minute but when they didn't it kinda felt wrong (fort time reader btw)
No that’s normal he genuinely doesn’t feel OK I’ve read a lot of relationships that are three-way and they actually freaking work is very freaking well I read in novel type and manga but this one just doesn’t work and it rubs me the wrong way
I want to ask a non related question
Y'all be writing essay (which is important and helpful and most importantly the truth)
But where is this brain when it comes to writing essay.
We all be writing long ass stuff but time for school work our brains go on lockdown ╥﹏╥
Why
Because we’re actually interested in us and majority of the things were not taught is either not propaganda or water down bullshit there’s actually a lot of stuff in school that if they told you the full truth people would be way more into it so yeah we’re just not into it the same way and it’s easier to dissect but I am at least not in school anymore thank God I am 21
Thank God for you
I have a lot to say about this story.
Okay so first of all, I read this story YEARS ago and re-read it for the second time today. Please tell me why the ending is completely different from my memories (and other people seems to have this problem too!) The start was the same but as I was reading the story my brain was getting confused and angry cause I remember Take and Mine ended up together and Hiroi left the 3p due to his jealousy and understood TxM love and Hiroi having character development contemplating his morals of sharing his things. Is this what people call the 'Mandela Effect' when different people have a shared false memory of a certain event?
Anyways I don't really know where to start but I literally spent like 10 hours of my day brooding over this manga and reading a majority of the comments and was shocked to see people thinking that this was a "healthy, perfect representation of a balanced poly relationship", Like mam' NO, please visit a therapist then a relationship expert or whatever they're called if you think this. People also say Hiroi is necessary and is like a glue for the relationship to work but I think that is COMPLETELY FALSE.
Anyways, let's start with our Uke Mine. Mine is literally in an abusive relationship right now, one of his partner is physically abusing him and the other partner is abusing him mentally and emotionally and is manipulating both of the characters but the story does not clearly show this. Mine does NOT have ANY power or say in the relationship AT ALL and all of the power is given to Hiroi. I do believe he should be with Take more as I feel he is the lesser evil of the two and we are not shown another character. Also the chemistry between him a Take... please it's OFF THE CHARTS. People don't realise this but sexual compatibility is actually kinda important in a relationship, it's just part of human nature. I really want to see Take leave the 3p and find someone else then see how long Hiroi and Mine last cause even Hiroi said it "You're still not satisfied, only I stuck it in" or something along the lines. We can also see that Mine and Take are more open with each other and see each other as equals, shown when Take hits Mine and Mine is able to hit him back.
Moving on to Take, My child here is fucked up that's for sure, but ever since he was young Hiroi shared everything with him so he grew up thinking it was normal. We were told that the little feelings he had towards his previous partners were gone as they start to only like him and others think it's the same with Mine too explaining why people think Hiroi is necessary, which is again false because this is the first time we actually see Take becoming possessive and wants something for himself hence marking Mine and was explained that he marked/bit the same spot multiple times to make sure the scar was permanent. The only reason he is mean towards Mine is because he cares about Hiroi and doesn't want a repeat of past relationships, if Take was actually nice, Hiroi would have to pack it up. (⌒▽⌒) Like if it was one or twice that their previous partners left Hiroi for Take it would be considered a coincidence, but if it was all the time.... it says a lot doesn't it.....
Finally Hiroi... FUCK YOU BITCH !! I hate your ass please pack it up, take a hike and jump off a cliff oh. my. GAWD (╯°'Д °)╯╧╧
He's a toxic and manipulating ass who is abusing the good feelings Mine and Take have towards him and forced Mine to have a relationship and sex with Take even though he didn't want to and gave him an ultimatum that if Mine didn't submit to his selfish request he would leave him. Let's also bring up the fact Hiroi tried forcefully shoving his miniscule dick in Mine when Take was already inside even tho Mine clearly said "NO" crying and how dare you want them to get along but then get jealous when they actually do get along and fucking placing a dogshit rule where they can only have a certain amount of sex without your ass, like please you said it yourself, your lousy ass and micro dick don't satisfy Mine anymore ( ՞ਊ ՞)☞ AND HIS ONLY REASON FOR LIKING MINE IS BECAUSE OF HIS DEPLORABLE INFERIORITY COMPLEX TOWARDS TAKE PFFT :)
Like, I love my fair share of fucked up and toxic shit in stories man, I really do but Hiori was NOT IT !! (╬￣皿￣)凸