i like this, but i feel there wasn't enough development of affections between the two of them, if there was more of a gap between the exposition and the affirmation of eachothers love it would've been better, but maybe that's just me being biased :-0
I get what you mean (they didn't portray a lot of depth or "events" to build their relationship), but it was also taking place over several months, so that made it feel ok to me
i like this, but i feel there wasn't enough development of affections between the two of them, if there was more of a gap between the exposition and the affirmation of eachothers love it would've been better, but maybe that's just me being biased :-0