Damn

Ayanami February 6, 2021 5:05 pm

I loved this story at first how the family fawned over her. But then the inconsistencies keep piling up...
Lippie mentioned before that he never spoke with that duke castillo or something but later shows moments that they did in fact get intimate to hold a decent casual conversation
And then the story "jumps" I mean I appreciate the long awaited time skip but they were in a social event where they just kept to their own worlds, then suddenly introduced another character, forgets that character and again proceeds with their own worlds, then the guy shows interest in lippie cuz she sounded like a piano while she was mad? That's hard to imagine happening tbh
Then suddenly she turns to a goth singer, meets princy again, somehow gains courage singing thanks to him (uhh support sure I guess?) But has to flee afterwards...
Am I considering dropping this story?
Highly likely.
The way they push the romance between Lippie and duke castello is just off to me. Just my opinion btw haha

Responses
    Cherry February 6, 2021 5:32 pm

    Mm well i think its implied that maybe duke n her had some sort of engagement or friendship of sorts in her past life, but we arnt supposed to know yet so i think its fine to be confused on that. I do agree that it was inconsistent w what she said at the very beginning but she only said it once very early n then they switched so personally i dont mind it too much. Not like it was a big deal in the plot back then. I miss the fauning too lol but i think its jus cause the ch r so short n so long between updates that it might feel like a while since weve seen the fam. On the other hand (while her fit is kinda wierd in this part) this part is important cause shes discovering her love and wish of freedom to sing. This part with singing and pianos has been consistent and seems to be an important part of the plot. And tbh its been a while since ive refreshed my memory but i believe we r not even into the main portion of her past life reoccurring yet. Thus i think its ok to be introducing new smaller charecters a little more fleetingly since they presumably will become players in the main part where its important. Altho falling in love w her piano voice do be kinda wack ngl lol. Anyways thats jus my opinion. Urs is def valid so if u wanna drop u can i jus thought id try n convince a bit yknow =3=) hehe maybe say a wee longer...= v=)