Um...

YaoiLover24 February 6, 2021 12:56 am

Kinda disappointed for multiple reasons:

1. The age gap, yeah yeah the uke is of age and this is fiction blah blah, sure BUT the seme literally looked after him when he was a kid? Is that strange only to me?

2. He also had a thing for his mom? And does the mom actually know? I would be fuming if I sent my kid to work and he got fucked by someone my age that I trusted

3. Their first time was awful in my opinion. Seme wasn't considerate enough even though he knew the uke was a virgin. Sure the uke liked it but he is a kid who is infatuated with a full grown adult for years now. Unfortunately he would be ok with anything he does to him but that doesn't necessarily mean it's ok. He could have been more gentle and caring

4. No plot, just boring. They was nothing there, I didn't even feel their "love", they were just horny 24/7

5. The whole almost getting raped multiple times is just weird. Also I'm sure if you have gone through something so traumatic even without the penetration you would need time to heal? But nope this is yaoi so let's fuck right after

6. The whole make me your chick thing... just ???

This could have been nice but it was mediocre. Just stating my thoughts, feel free to disagree *politely pls*!

Responses
    nacchan February 5, 2021 4:52 pm

    i stopped reading after their age and the fact that he took care of the young uke were revealed. it does feel somewhat weird like he practically helped raise the child dhshhshs

    and thanks to the trigger warning by the uploader too since that kinda r*pe trope makes me feel uncomfortable

    YaoiLover24 February 5, 2021 9:09 pm
    i stopped reading after their age and the fact that he took care of the young uke were revealed. it does feel somewhat weird like he practically helped raise the child dhshhshsand thanks to the trigger warning ... nacchan

    Yeah I get what you mean!

    Maleficent February 5, 2021 9:14 pm

    Totally agreed. It just felt off. I am with age gap and shit and even like it but like this was just pathologic.
    And the points you made were totally right, some things just didn't sit well like i dunno.

    calmdownjamal February 5, 2021 9:48 pm

    Well I agree with everything written here but a quick reminder that its all just fiction. This genre of manga usually is never realistic. I think as long as it doesnt affect real life we can let the author create any type of situation/plot, and remember that we as the readers are sort of a visitor in their imagination. We should be accepting of whatever there is, since a lot of effort is put into each panel that forms the story. Of course, not agreeing with the content and criticism is always welcomed.

    YaoiLover24 February 5, 2021 10:40 pm
    Totally agreed. It just felt off. I am with age gap and shit and even like it but like this was just pathologic. And the points you made were totally right, some things just didn't sit well like i dunno. Maleficent

    I'm glad someone agrees with me. Got quite a few dislikes so I was waiting to be bullied lol.

    YaoiLover24 February 5, 2021 10:45 pm
    Well I agree with everything written here but a quick reminder that its all just fiction. This genre of manga usually is never realistic. I think as long as it doesnt affect real life we can let the author crea... calmdownjamal

    Of course everyone has the right to enjoy whatever they want as long as it's not hurting anyone.

    I just saw so many positive comments and after reading it I had to disagree and express my thoughts. The author is super talented and if I remember correctly I loved another of their works. I'm not bashing them or their work.

    Also I know it's fiction but my morals and beliefs don't just vanish when I read yaoi, I know some people don't care but I do. I'm not into rapey toxic stories even when it's fictional.
    Personal preference for sure.

    Gettothepoint9 February 6, 2021 12:17 am

    You forgot about the nonsensical conversation... I mean... it's bonkers
    "Make me your chick" ... seriously?!... for real?!... what the F?!

    YaoiLover24 February 6, 2021 12:55 am
    You forgot about the nonsensical conversation... I mean... it's bonkers"Make me your chick" ... seriously?!... for real?!... what the F?! Gettothepoint9

    How could I forget?? I'll try to edit my initial comment, thanks!

    YaoiLover24 February 6, 2021 1:28 am

    Guys for some reason I can't see the replies anymore. I got a notif but can't see it for now. Sorry.

    Iluvtoast February 6, 2021 6:49 am

    U took the words Rt out of my mouth Istg

    YaoiLover24 February 6, 2021 1:35 pm
    U took the words Rt out of my mouth Istg Iluvtoast

    (≧∀≦)

    Maleficent February 7, 2021 1:48 am
    I'm glad someone agrees with me. Got quite a few dislikes so I was waiting to be bullied lol. YaoiLover24

    Ikr. I very much like making controversial comments and debating hddhdhdh.
    Anyway, honey you are just explaining what you think and i mean come on, i am not trying to create an argument, but like shotacon is a fiction genre too you know? And a fiction tag doesn't make the work approvable. Doesn't make the work passable. If it is a content which has a audience and that everyone can access to i think authors or editors have to keep in mind that there are that may be influenced by this, young readers especially. I am not saying you should create a content so that families can read it but it is just that content shouldn't suggest immorality.

    Maleficent February 7, 2021 1:49 am
    I'm glad someone agrees with me. Got quite a few dislikes so I was waiting to be bullied lol. YaoiLover24

    There are people*

    Maleficent February 7, 2021 1:51 am
    I'm glad someone agrees with me. Got quite a few dislikes so I was waiting to be bullied lol. YaoiLover24

    And the rape think was like

    Maleficent February 7, 2021 1:51 am
    I'm glad someone agrees with me. Got quite a few dislikes so I was waiting to be bullied lol. YaoiLover24

    ....

    YaoiLover24 February 7, 2021 3:07 am
    Ikr. I very much like making controversial comments and debating hddhdhdh. Anyway, honey you are just explaining what you think and i mean come on, i am not trying to create an argument, but like shotacon is a ... Maleficent

    Yeah like I said I understand why some people pass it off as fiction and are able to enjoy it for what it is but again my personal moral and beliefs don't just vanish because I decided to read a manga lol.

    I think it's ok to like certain things as long as you are not hurting anyone.

    This one was just not for me. Too many things bothered me, hence my initial comment.

    YaoiLover24 February 7, 2021 3:08 am
    .... Maleficent

    ??

    People can be awful at times so I was prepared for nasty comments.

    Maleficent February 7, 2021 11:51 am
    ??People can be awful at times so I was prepared for nasty comments. YaoiLover24

    Rape thing was like ....

    Maleficent February 7, 2021 11:52 am
    Yeah like I said I understand why some people pass it off as fiction and are able to enjoy it for what it is but again my personal moral and beliefs don't just vanish because I decided to read a manga lol. I th... YaoiLover24

    True. Well said.