Mhmmm...

PrincessMoonlight February 5, 2021 1:16 pm

Overall what’ve have read so far the stroy is losing the red thread. The plot is hardly anywhere to be seen and it’s Just lacking that special something. Idk this is just my opinion. Not only that I really don’t like how do many older men are touching her constantly and picking her up. Like I get she’s weak and a child but it’s really uncomfortable for me as a reader to see this. Personally I really don’t recommend it, I my self love romantic stories and only at chapter 30 we see a bit of romance but it won’t go anywhere for while. It’s more of a much fantasy world type thing. Really could have been better. I give a solid 4.5/10

Responses
    Gabbie~ February 5, 2021 3:01 pm

    Yeah it dis kinda felt boring bcoz of long character devs. And a long time of not uploading but there's still this urge to ship them so there better be romance after this

    Kaime February 5, 2021 4:14 pm

    I actually like the slowpace of the story. A story that rushes into romance is just shit to me. So these moments of slow chracter dev feels like a breath of fresh air. I'm enjoying this story. (=・ω・=)

    Gabbie~ February 5, 2021 5:24 pm
    I actually like the slowpace of the story. A story that rushes into romance is just shit to me. So these moments of slow chracter dev feels like a breath of fresh air. I'm enjoying this story. (=・ω・=) Kaime

    Yeah but you know that feeling of excitement and getting into the story but then you were cut off and then kinda forgetting the what happened before so like for me it wasn't as exciting as when I read the first few chapters, well I'm not in the position to tell anyone how slow they're going, so it was really the excitement dying bcoz of long updates

    Kaime February 5, 2021 11:33 pm
    Yeah but you know that feeling of excitement and getting into the story but then you were cut off and then kinda forgetting the what happened before so like for me it wasn't as exciting as when I read the first... Gabbie~

    Understandable long hiatuses can lower the hype by a loooot

    Snow February 8, 2021 3:06 pm

    mhmmm

    Nizze February 19, 2021 3:41 am

    Well I do get it but... the build up is necessary... also... none of them sees her that way now. And the king id 17~19 now, even if he looks older...
    And don't forget she is an adult woman inside. I mean that cuz as you said you are into romance and in many of them we have adult women getting in the bodies of children and getting into a romantic relationship with guys they grew up with and many times are even step or adopted brothers. So if you look as it in other way... a adult woman possessed a kids body and groomed a kid into a future husband... but that's looking it in a ugly light. ╮( ̄▽ ̄)╭
    But don't worry. Nothing happens before she grows up...