I couldn’t finish this but..

マザーファッカー February 5, 2021 9:49 am

It seems I’m not missing anything from what I see after reading the comments. I don’t have much to say on this story since I didn’t finish it and stopped on the 2nd chapter. I have a few thoughts on what I DID read though and what I saw. The reason I put this down so quickly was because One the art, the art.. it’s.. it’s driving me insane. The pages are messy and too much is going on in some pages, it makes it very difficult to follow what’s happening during sex scenes. The anatomy in this story is dreadful when it comes to the sex scenes, honesty don’t know if I can say it’s the anatomy or if it’s just that the pages are so fucking messy making it looks like they’re body parts are stretching. Some of the pages looked like sketches that the author decided to clean up a bit and throw in. Second thing is the plot, like I said before I stopped on the 2nd chapter but from what I gathered is this “wild game” was not explained in a very clear and understandable way, I thought I was reading the hunger games but with a modern twist with the way they described this “game”. This whole thing was a mess.

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