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You rock, Anon.
Yeah. Admittedly, the obliviousness of the ML as to how horrible Caroline was would normally have me give this lower marks. But the FL and animals just made it AWESOME. I also liked her grandpa and the twins as well.
Let's just say the FL the kids and the animals must have a backache for carrying this story
ML is so useless... if you want a wife to have an organized home you actually need housekeepers. And HOW F-ING BLIND are you?!?! He's lucky the children weren't taken away by social service , what he did was close to child neglect!! He is not a AH in terms of being mysoginist but he is an AH in terms of parenting and judging people. ML is lucky he didn't marry, she would really have used that whip on the children and it would have been too late by then.
FL is the GOAT in Harlequin, strong, sarcastic, doesn't back down and know when to play her cards. But TBH I would have sued Caroline for assault, wring her dry and have her banned from all equestrian clubs in the world. Jack was a good grandpa, he knows what his grandaughter needs and wants the best for her, super chill family!
Loved the dogs, loved the horses, loved the cows, the dialogue ballons were super nice!
The children are cute and have good intuition, were honest, knows what they want and they felt very well written!
It has a very good subversion: ML becomes a stay at home husband and adminstrate their farms while FL puts her hands on deck and continues to compete. Being a family means that: working together in the best of their abilities, not "a millionaire/rich guy sustain you forever"