great story!

vvxi February 3, 2021 2:10 pm

To be honest I liked it, a happy ending and some other good stuff. A few things do need explaining but I'm happy for the ending. I don't understand the hateful comments but then again not everybody has the same interest. Great story though!

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    Ella April 7, 2021 6:52 pm

    “Hateful comments”. More like comments who are trying to tell the author to explain what’s going on with a more detailed script. Everything is fast paced, lots of plot holes, one scene they’re at school and another they’re in a completely different place without proper explanation. The characters barely have any personality, unless you want to count the cringy 2016-humour, along with the ‘bro-girl’ act.