Ok, I just have one small nitpick about this story that'll probably just seem like a petty...

KissMeDarkly December 9, 2015 4:57 am

Ok, I just have one small nitpick about this story that'll probably just seem like a petty, minor thing to focus on, but by the time Tasuna had been assaulted by Himushi and his men, he'd already been a goldsmith for at least 6 years, part of which involved living in the mountains, which is no simple task by itself. Blacksmithing, especially goldsmithing, being a very heavy metal, is NOT an easy task, and requires immense physical strength, stamina, and endurance, not to mention mental aptitudes. There's no way in HELL that Tasuna, having been working for 6 years under those conditions, would ever have such a hard time just lifting a simple short sword. He has to pick up and haul around metals weighing ten times what that sword would have weighed everyday as part of his craft. So, how....?

Again, sorry for the rant. I know it's such a small part of the story that holds absolutely no relevance or bearing to the overall telling. It just weirded me out. It neither takes nor gives anything to the story, which is absolutely wonderful. Just voicing my own opinions.

Responses
    Kinoin December 19, 2015 6:39 pm

    It's always nice to hear different oppinions :D

    Yaoi_Lover_Z<3S January 20, 2016 6:29 pm

    I agree.....and i think Tasuna would gain a little bit of mussel......like you said it was 6 years of hard work!! ;3

    YayYaoi! February 29, 2016 12:37 am

    That's because he's an Uke and ukes should be cute ╮( ̄▽ ̄)╭

    Huppyvirus April 9, 2016 7:56 am

    I was hoping for some masculine growth too but eitherway it's fine, i just consider the fact that some people in the gym does not become muscular until they ingest some weird stuff and some people are just gifted with slim bodies

    Watashi June 5, 2020 3:18 pm
    That's because he's an Uke and ukes should be cute ╮( ̄▽ ̄)╭ @YayYaoi!