just my opinion

the plot confusing and nobody in this story deserves edgar actually include duroa,omg the first time i hate fl this much why so dumb,why she cant take a hint and lost in her thought,edgar you deserves someone better,who could understand him and accept him eventually not a hyprocate,at first its seems promising but later its not,and what a naive word the fl say to ml "dont ever kill" when his whole life other people tried to kill him ,its a place where if u dont kill then u die,when u show mercy to people they will just bite you back later,maybe i wish such a strong fl lead who will stand beside him through all this,and isnt her real charachter was a villain,maybe if the author make her play along as villain who suit the ml that will be so lit!!!so people wont dare to look down to this strong couple