I read non stop but I'm gonna criticize now.

Semsem January 27, 2021 10:10 am

Mc is too op. He is way too lucky. Whenever he chooses an item, that can only be legendary. In a rpgs leveling up after level 80 is hell. But he level ups like... Easy peasy lemon squeezy...

There is war, he has the wisdom but u don’t see any strategy in this story. Because its not even needed.

“Bam bam bam now u r dead you also dead now you dead too, whoa killing all of you is just too easy...”

He is like a magic wand that fixes every problem with one touch. Balance didn’t organized well in this story.

I don’t feel bad for npc villains. They can respawn later right? No? I still want to think they can respawn after a couple of time.

Don’t get me wrong I read this without sleep, in one go. I really liked it. But I feel like everyone except mc is "damsel in distress, whom waiting for mc to help". I’m prb just jealous. I’m waiting for him to get banned at the game lol.

Responses
    Lucyfer69 January 27, 2021 1:00 pm

    Hahahahaha luckily he didn't get ban. Oh and it's a story about a person who loves reading, so he wasn't just lucky, he is also doing what he wants. It's just that he is reading books in the game that's make him too much op for having wisdom exceeding normal user. So yeah just bear with the story.