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Nice concept, pretty unique and fairly well developed too, in the end I can't really say there were major flaws BUT the premise was so incredibly good that I wish the author spent a little more time on making a solid and convincing world building. The whole part where the secret is exposed felt weird like it was really not that big of a deal, the way they got togheter also was a bit off because some issues were clearly not addressed (even tho i guess they were implicit?)
First half of the story was amazing, very dramatic with perfect pacing & made me cry a river, but the second half was rlly unsatisfying with a lot of unnecessary drama to drag the plot
One had been in an unrequited love since forever yet once their misunderstandings got cleared up he decides to move on with his life for no believable reason whatsoever. The pacing, the themes, the atmosphere, the depth, the drama...this story does a good 180 on everything and in the end nothing fits right any
This was gooood, I liked the concept and the interactions were cute but the ending was really rushed and anti-climatic. I really think the author planned this story to have a lot more chapters but something happened in the middle of it that made them wrap it up way sooner
The story is amazing for the most part but towards the end I felt like the drama was not balanced out too well. There are a lot of pretty heavy chapters and the drama just keeps on adding until things are solved at the very very end so you don't get a chance to see their relationship being cute and healty for long. Honestly after everything Jaerim went through for Yuri and because of Yuri I wish I could see him being spoiled a lot more. Also the rape(?) part was totally unnecessary.
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