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[2/10]
The plot in this story was mediocre at best, and the ending was way too rushed. The characters also seemed one-dimensional and I didn't really feel anything for them, one way or the other.
[1/10]
Barely any plot and everything was WAY too rushed, also the MC is very bland in my opinion - with a flat personality. Not to mention, that the anatomy is this was very irritating to look at imo, since Miss MC's tits are way too high up on her chest and make her look goofy.
[2/10]
Started off having potential, but then the story started adding a bunch of unnecessary misunderstandings and miscommunication - which makes the MC very unlikable, imo. They paint the love interest as this "big bad villain", but in all honesty, is the only character in this story with a brain and some semblence of a personality.
[2/10]
I can understand the MC has self-esteem issues and all, but the constant miscommunication in this story irritates me to no extent - not to mention the plot's not all that great. The ML has temper issues and jumps to conclusions and the meekness of the MC doesn't really mesh well together with that, imo. Oh, and the only way they "resolve" their fighting is by having sex - not, you know - verbally communicating.
[1/10]
Plot is non-existent, story's just an excuse to draw smut.
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