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All around strong and growing mc, he's so pretty dressing as a girl though. it's comedic pretty ok, not too much not too half heartly.
I just hate that the mc is too hero mental, wanting to save everyone and want to immediately play hero without thinking through. He don't even want to kill 'anybody', even though that 'anybody' is killing innocents and his team. Brain hole detected, way too saint, many other characters has better mind set than mc. Like many other characters (they have depth and each interesting) except those stupid sluts and useless burdens that mc take to the team.
Swimming. Seems great. He's clumsy and funny guy
Seems promising, only if in the future it still won't focus on girls and just adventure action
Cool. My cup of tea, focus on the action adventure. Great characterizations, mc is likeable, strong, capable, calculative, and smart. Nice nice
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