4/5
I like this story, the MC is very cunning. Moving on to one scheme on to the next. But the ML is just really boring, he's a potato (in my opionion) Also i dont like how Oliva ends up with the little prince (that's what i hearddd) and that Cayena just gives up the throne at the end. Ik it's always been her intention but I would actually like her to be a girl boss instead of a nice person.
3/5
The story is meh. the plot is shit. Fl's hiding her identity for a shitty reason that I can't remember. It's really shit, topics such as Fl's brother self harming is just thrown in there to shock the reader and never explored. The ML is like 'why did I treat her so badly' on the 20th chapter, that shit needs be said about at the 10084785746857 chapter.
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guys can u give me feedback on my list. I would definitely like some suggestions of how I can make it better.