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This was short but sweet. Was confusing at times because it seemed like too much was skipped, but it was still good. The chapters are really short too. So if you want a sweet quickly, you stopped at the right place. I would've liked to see more personally.
I was initially unsure wether to read this or not. But, I'm glad I decided to read it. It IS very heart wrenching! BUT, it's told in such a smooth manner. It was very well put together, and executed. Sometimes I was unsure who was speaking at the time or who's inner monologue it was. But it was usually easily figured out after reading it. The character growth was well done also. It's very dramatic, yet very melancholic at the same time. And how it kinda changed at the end was also very clever. I
This was super cute! Definitely worth reading. Especially if you want something that's just all sweet, and feel good.
Slow and easy going. But not terribly long. There's 98 chapters, but the chapters are mostly pretty short.
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