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paused at chapter 36; progression is kinda slow and characters are still kids
paused at 115; story is draggingnand FLs eyes r bugging me
paused at 110; FL is stubborn and keeps wanting to stick to the storyline, ML has little personality lol
paused at chapter 80, so many things happening so litttle romance. also FL just turned 18 and ML is 27
paused at chapter 34; kinda uncomfy with the FLs brother and ML is so passive
paused at chapter 35; GOOD STORY but the priest is annoying and everyone is so calm or sad
paused on chapter 41: love the father-daughter dynamic but story starts dragging out
paused at chapter 59: not feeling it? characters have no chemistry; might drop
paused at chapter 42: AMAZING ART but characters are kinda bland and plot is getting kinda flat
paused at chapter 42: GOOD STORY GOOD ROMANCE, just expected more? will pick it up soon!
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