Don't like/Needs a reread

It was fun at first with how she really has a stationary store & was about to live fine, but I hated how it's partially not. It deviated with revenge then politics & romance, which I hated too. I also didnt like the chosen ml, she could have just picked the one who was always with her but nope

Not my cup of tea, fl could've done way more thinking before she always acts out. Like girly knows she's in a horror themed story yet always act so dumb & stupid? I felt annoyed cause this isn't the type of story that should have comedy relief or comedy itself

This is just ridiculous, sure I understand why she didn't think of taking another man out of revenge or divorce him immediately due to her personality, but how come she's still his wife? I feel like fl just wants to suffer/ play his games at this point playing patty cakes with the ml & making her husband know. Also, the more the story progressed, it keeps deviating, im sorry, but this is a deep no for me

Its ok but not at the same time. Love the fls personality but isnt she still an adult inside & that shes the creator of this story shes in, so wouldnt that be more of a guilty conscience? Im ok with her doing everything for the ml & everyone affected by her writing, but to blush & be interested in them while them still being children is gross