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This is so good but since it only has 3 chaps so far cant say for certain yet. Marinate!
Update: I read this is only for a competition & not an actual serialisation so im sad it'll only stay 3 chaps
It's annoying how they don't let him just kill everyone, he is always being stopped by the talk no jutsu. This needs more chapters to get interesting
This is a good read from the beginning, but if you dont read it consistently it gets confusing & boring when you try to reread it again. Love the family moments mc has with his family & friends but so far as the story progress, why the hell is he always caught up fighting? To me it isnt my cup of tea since the reason mc came back to his family was to bond with them & live a NORMAL life but now it feels like fighting & fixing other peoples problems is all he does
This was cool, a dead dad who roamed around for a bit cause he can't just leave his young daughter, then see she's getting bullied so the dad found out he can posses this high school boy & protect her. That's about it but it gets interesting since you know the dad has to leave cause again, he is dead & the living must go on. Sadly, this hasn't been updated for so long....I fear it'll never be finished
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