I commend the FL's ferocity so to speak, but the story is jumping too fast, yet not enough. Character development has the barest bullet points before leaping towards the finish line of the cliche "FL-on-top". It had potential, but the emotional development wasn't done well, and panders to the consumable preferences of isekai-bingers. It could've been good, it could've been better. It's just disappointing
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