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I’m not sure Smart or Stong is the perfect description for her. I mean she is cunning but also kind of air headed. Which is a weird combo that I think is more to benefit the story than the character. (All of the characters are similar in this aspect. Where they have traits that directly contradict each other) Regardless I enjoy reading this, I do think it’s worth the read maybe as something you don’t need to think too hard about.
This is still at the beginning of its story, and I feel it could go either way in terms of good or meh.
I like the female lead, but some of the things she does are odd and irk me somewhat. I want to say it’s because she is still unsure of her place in the story so I’m hoping going forward it will get better.
I am not sure if this is completed or not, it hasn’t been updated in awhile but it has so many chapters, anyways, I made it to about ch 50 before I got slightly irked. I still think this is a good read and the female lead has really good character growth that I liked reading.
Problem is at about the halfway mark the story started to lose that charm of survival at all cost/conquer your fear or die kind of vibe.
think this story would have benefited from a less complex understory.
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