beta
Is really good but I feel like the villan could be more developed,sorta feels rushed
The ML is kinda of shifty, it takes a while for him to see the FL like an actual person, not just some object for him to use
It has a nice story and the art is pretty good,but the FML is kind of a plant,she doesn't take action unless is related to the ML and the side characters are not that good either
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