story write

there's something about this

i like the "we're both hiding our identities from each other" trope

8.9/10 character kinda makes sense? some inconsistencey and plot holes on mc's end but i really like how they write side characters thel. i really like the pacing tho, there's something to it

wow. just wow. mc is outstanding in terms of survival instinct. and something about the way this story is written has us on the edge of our seats. the pacing is great, not too rushed, not to dragged. it's a great story. but it's not that "kapaow" kind of exciting either, it's a "complete" story u know (can't find anything wrong with it. everything is good and it's a balance), like the favorite book u read that is not as exciting as the action movie u watch but u hold it dear.