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FL acts like she doesn’t care but then actively goes to visit ML for no reason even while knowing in the OG story he broke free of the chains and r worded OG!FL. MC calling ML young and ML literally barking is so off putting.
This gets worse with the spoilers: Don’t read until completed. MC is weak. Her “brother” chains her up and keeps her there (they aren’t related). Then MC goes to some ball and ML kidnaps her and she is cool with it bc she likes him.
I can’t even describe how unlikable and dumb MC is.
It resolves the main problem at 15 where she wins her case. Afterwards it’s just a forced romance with the Duke. Both of them are boring. All the villains are obvious.
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