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Good, BUT he keeps being guilty and avoiding his previous teammates instead of just helping them in his second life—obviously because he knows future benefits and events which could be helpful. He keeps making the excuse that he’s bad luck to others while helping other players besides his previous teammates—especially his guild leader who cared so much for him.
great plot and character progression
Cocky ML. I find him annoying for some reason.
It was really good BUT THEN came female characters with indications that they have feelings for the ML. So, as another cliche, the author decided to be vague about his feelings even when he almost kissed one. Seriously? Can’t you just either focus on martial arts or be clear with 1 FL?? Is it too much to ask not to taint a very good plot with your version of “romance”?
I understand he has a child and has feelings for Eunhye, but it’s so ridiculous that the author still keeps adding female characters with him in so many frames. Like there’s no strong male characters who can fight beside him and instead creating another wave of female characters who help him instead. Really classy. Really.
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