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The ideas are cool but the execution leaves much to be desired, the reader doesn’t really feel anything like at all as in I can see that the mL is obsessed with the fL but I can’t feel it as a fully developed character trait of his, and that’s applied to everything other thing like fL need to get home, her parents concern for her, her friends feelings etc

Im sorry y’all I can’t stand the female lead, I’m not saying to support murder but the mL kills the guy whos been sexually harassing her and might have r-word her and she gets scared of him??? Maybe idk be relieved that guy is dead and you have a REALLY powerful guy in your corner???

She is the top dog of the army, a war hero who valiantly fough for her country for years, besties with crown prince + the dad is top dog of the magicians the most powerful wizard of this shit also besties with the crown prince, and she’s afraid that his shitty family would take her baby away I- excuse me- what even- what’s that logic-

1- Some body horror right here my girl looks like a pterodactyl sometimes
2- what does “steal the night” actually mean cause I thought it was bow chika wow wow but then she says she did it to her dad so it’s not bow chika wow wow…I guess?
3- he found her immediately by just her red hair…something that many woman in the kingdom must have… I would say I’m dissapointed but at this point-

This dumb bich smh you know that the og maid lusts after him and what do you do the moment you are with the prince let’s see blush check kiss him check be pinned down by him checkkkkk seriously girly are you even trying -.-

I quite liked it when I started it but then they got out of the forest and everything became annoying, his childhood friend/ brother is annoying, the prince is annoying// also non related but the art changed like so bad??? If you compare the first and last chapter you’d feel insane

Girlllll dump his ass right this second

I can forgive the kidnapping since it is a story with no real people in it but I just can’t handle Amy another second like girl you are so annoying, besides the overall obsession with following the og time line for no reason (miss you have magic that makes you capable of wishing for anything you want and you didn’t think “hey maybe I could my bf?”) I just don’t buy her falling in love with Nox like no girlie you ain’t in love you literally just find hot