beta
Boring title
- Stereotypical badass MC wannabe
- endured for ur late mother? lame excuse
- START w the action, not irrelevant info, late intro @ ch5
- weird narration
- Cons: flat MC, no Emotional Dynamic Change, no excitement or curiosity, we could've wondered if she actually lived up to the rumors around her, feel nervous for her cuz her attitude give ppl reason to dislike her
- Mary Sue & Gary Stu meeting?
- she's more funny aloof but art translation = pretty, but pretty boring
I'm starting to realize a trend in my preference
I dislike stories abt wanting to live in peace ("The Lady Wants to Rest" was nice tho)
this story is boring cuz there's barely any action, motivation, twist, or relationship building
If these two Mains were background characters, it'd prob be better
literally every other character is energetic/interesting, EXCEPT for the MC;;;
and what does poison guy like abt MC anyways? are you Gary Stu???
small parts I liked about this story before dropping:
- finding out that the crown prince had a soft spot for and either took the poison cuz it's from her or consumed anything cuz it's from her
- finding out that the crown prince was a really great guy and genuinely cares deeply for her in her next life
But, I dropped cuz I don't like the FL, her toxic ex-fiance and family, unpleasant female competition and characters
Messages