meh list

Became uncomfortable to read
- her goal is somewhat clear, but her actions are barely present
- she overthinks and drags things on when a topic could've been shortened by more than half
- her feelings and opinions are too wishy-washy, she's not determined when she's supposed to be
overall: story feels like playing with dolls, not inspiring, too much monologuing
Can be nerverecking but should also be comedic & determined (overtime)
and have clear development

Felt like the story got sidetracked and lost it's (already slow no climax & interesting obstacle) pace when blondie's bro showed up w his "depression" (artificial obstacle & not important) Beginning flowed nicely but it focused on too many topics that everything feels diluted in a sense, tho gave reason to meet
this story is about mc gettinig into a relationship,peaceful stories like this can b good but needs more spice & risk & hook
destroy my expectations