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3/10
i hate how this was supposed to be about the twins but actually it's only about the girl twin?? it wouldve been fine to have her as a focus but the author, in making the girl the focus, neglects actually creating characters with depth. instead the author just turns every other character to characters whose only personality trait is loving the girl twin. characters are shallow and the plot is boring. the concept of twins reincarnating together was great, the execution was shit.
5.3/10
liked it at the beginning but it got repetitive. same thing happens over and over again. should've been way shorter
why is the ml the child??? that she raised??? what the fuck???
2/10
mc is annoying and stupid. why does she act so childish when she literally has the mental age of an adult? plot is also shallow and predictable
2/10
plot is super predictable and mc's character is boring and annoying. i just know that if the story was written in the red haired lady's pov the readers would hate the current mc lol.
5/10
flat characters, weird pacing, predictable plot, and of course the og fl is the villainess
6/10
really weird/confusing pacing?? story falls flat and feels unorganized. fl is boring and stupid and conveniently has the ability to charm all women by saying a few generic words? like that one scene where she was like "live ur life the way u want to!" and all of a sudden the girl loves her???? ml has a really nice design (glasses!!), but i wish he and all of the characters in this story weren't so one dimensional...
5/10
was this written by a child?? lmao
4/10
mc is stupid and annoying
4/10
ch.7 "guys stop fighting!" oh my fucking god im going to THROW UP. immediately dropped
plot is kinda all over the place and fl is annoying
what a waste of good art...
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