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Premise is nothing new. Story is not bad but it doesn't make me excited. Story execution is ok. Art is good. FL is likeable. 1 ML is annoying, 1 ML is likeable & seems nice, the other ML hasn't appeared yet from where I last read.
This was surprisingly good. I like FL's character. She's independent, has conviction, and a business woman. ML is a green flag. Elliot is a cute hamster Story is simple but enjoyable nonetheless. It's a lightread about family and business ventures. Although, I gotta say some supporting characters were discarded & forgotten by the author without so much as an explanation of the reason for their disappearance.
Same old recycled plot. Author has poor naming sense. I just read it for the fluff childcare.
Story is cliché (which I would normally give a chance) but the execution on this one is bad. The outcomes of scenarios are predictable. Pacing is a bit too fast. Personalities of FL & other supporting characters are generic, making them bland. Translations are off.
I like the FL. She's strong-willed & uses the sources available to her well. The way she puts the other b*tch in place is satisfying. What I don't like in this story is that the ML is the emperor. He changed & started paying attention to FL simply bec. she has changed & asked for a divorce. It's the typical trope that I honestly don't like.
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