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Dropped (ch3): I don’t understand why she’s so affected by her fiancée’s, the villain, having an affair with the ogfl. She should be celebrating that she actually changed the story. The guild for outing adulterers was also oddly specific and came out of nowhere. I also don’t like the first impression on the crown prince (ml) who was supposed to be ugly yet looks normal with some power.
Dropped (ch10): It’s different but it’s also boring. I get that they’re trying to do some dark story but it feels force. In ch10, the fl heard a scream at night and she goes out to check it? Who does that? Moreover, she faints after seeing the ml (I guess he was covered in blood close to her house for some reason)?
Dropped (ch64): Lost interest. I find it over the top she can tame all the spirits without any hard work along with seeing ghosts. The og fl is also put to the side for too long that any interactions with her feels forced.
Dropped (ch34): Lost interest of the story. I know I should wait more for the mc’s development (good so far) but it’s gotten boring and cringe with everyone (side characters) pushing the mc and the ml together every chapter.
Dropped (ch38): Lost interest because the mc just keeps hovering the emperor (which I understand, she couldn’t stop loving him despite him taking multiple consorts including her friend…). Most of the problems are petty and mostly solved somehow without foreshadowing.
Dropped chapter(51): Lost interest. It started good with her family relationship, tackling the sadness everyone felt with the countess's death despite being warned about it. But the story just keeps showing without explaining anything including Ladune’s will. It’s hard to connect with the story when the power she was trying to gain isn’t explained more so when the training was over in a few panels…
Dropped ch35: I liked it because it tackled acceptance to her short life and trying to have the most impact within the limit. It just wasn’t detailed enough to make other characters feel real, the characters are way simplified.
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