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5/5
Set my standards high for this genre.
The story is amazing, MC decides to save FL from getting with her trash suitors. The main Villain was also creative and there are some twists which are quite refreshing to read. MC is capable, strong, and gets physically stronger throughout the story. She is one of the best female leads I read and I seriously recommend this story
4/5
Healthy Relationship
Both MC and ML have such a healthy relationship and they ACTUALLY COMMUNICATE!
ML had a bit of yandere things going on, but it was addressed and handled well. Girls were not pitted against one another for 'development'. MC DID NOT PUSH ML TO GET WITH OGFL, she understood his feelings and I loved this! Antagonist did not take up too much screentime. ogFL should have been treated better. Crown Prince could have been written better.
3/5
Could be better
MC is ogVillain and is supposed to abuse FL. MC decides to take care of FL instead, which causes her to take the abuse of her mother. MC saves FL, she then takes FL to her family. This is where the story goes downhill, everything is now just about MC, not FL, the one who is like 5 and is literally their family, just MC. There is also unnecessary arcs, like the author took the kid who protected MC and made him have conflict with ML for no reason just to prove 'ML better&
3/5
Shitty Translations be warned
Over time I have developed an ability to read the worst translations so this is what I have so far. MC is dealing with her parents favoring her sister and even going to lengths to have her sister get with her fiancé. Thankfully ML (fiancé) only has eyes for her and the sister supports MC and ML's relationship, slowly realizing that her family is not great. I feel like MC will have an absolute banger revenge on her parents later on.
5/5
Don't know why people hates MC
MC is really strong, she has been abused from birth and when she grows up she goes through so much development. MC at first does not want to interfere with the original story, but does it to protect herself and ML. ML is alright, he is not really a walking red flag, but he is a bit crazy, he does care a lot for MC and shows it. MC is not useless she is going through her own trauma she experienced. I can see ML and MC being a power couple in the future.
3/5
Shitty Translations & Editing
Time to summarize the shitty translations. MC realizes she is an obsessed villain and decides to just move to the countryside, but later returns, on her way back she sees the ML's nephew being bullied so she saves him without knowing he was ML's nephew. Cutting to the main plot she is now actively trying to save the nephew from the Emperor and Empress. MC is strong, smart, and has the ability to see the future of what she changed in the novel.
2/5
Bland storytelling
MC divorces her ex husband and starts a jewelry business and gets with some brown haired dude. Thats it, that's the story. She doesn't start doing revenge on her ex husband which I respect, but there is nothing that makes this story unique. The author obviously saw this and added more ML options!!! But we know who is obviously going to end up with FL anyway. The author also doesn't show much interest in the story and MC is just a Mary Sue Incarnate.
2/5
Had Potential
Here we have one of those 'protective father' type of tropes. I absolutely hate these because this is not a 'protective' person this is a creep who doesn't like it when their daughter shows attention to someone else. MC is scared of her father, but ends up liking him, then something happens and her tail is shown and she runs away. MC then meets every single ML? It could have been written better tbh. MC's father also wants her to be the heir??
5/5
Love her
MC is the most badass person, she needs to die by the ogML in order to return to her world so she makes an elaborate plan to kill ogFL in order to die. This is a tragedy story, but it does have a happy ending with MC and ML together. I don't want to spoil the whole thing but there are some really tough decisions MC has to make. I recommend this though it deserves its high rating.
2/5
MC needs to use that brain
We are told at the beginning of the story that MC is from the 21st Century, OK cool, so why the hell is she still trying to get her sister (ogFL) to get with a guy (ML) three times her age? This was my thought from the beginning, and I thought it would end, but nope. In general, ML and MC both have a healthy relationship when they entered a contract marriage. MC still thinks ML will break up with her and get with ogFL.
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