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overall good and interesting to read! the plot is pretty unique despite having some cliches! pacing is not bad but “revenge” felt a little anticlimactic? idk.. i enjoy the ml being a huge simp for fl, its cute but also feels a little shallow bc they dont do much banter except being lovey dovey. i dropped after her revenge bc i feel like the story shouldve ended there instead of dragging it out. enjoyable and entertaining read, 7/10 !
the art is so attractive omg even if it feels a little stiff its still so gorgeous! i like the premise of the story but its not that unique to me. the fl and ml look AMAZING together but i think they lack chemistry so hopefully the story will build on their relationship more.. still entertaining and very pleasing to the eyes!! 6.5/10
MELISSA IS THE FUNNIEST FL NO CONTEST. shes very strong willed and passionate and hilarious!! makes the story so entertaining. i dont love ml nine even tho he does have cute moments with fl.. yuri and melissa wouldve been so cute together!! im on ch 89 and it now feels like its dragging out for too long now so idk if ill ever finish it but it was still a very enjoyable read!!! melissa definitely carried lol 8.5/10
noah and raeliana together.. i dont even like enemies to lovers but its executed pretty naturally here and i LOVE their chemistry. it rlly makes u cling onto those moments when they actually show they care abt each other. the fl also doesnt feel shallow and actually thinks abt her past life lmao like imagine u get isekaid and u dont care abt who u left behind at all its just unrealistic.. so its good that they include that abt her character bc it gives her depth. good so far! 8/10
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