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Chap 5, I need to follows the plot, meh, don't like it. Like Sha has to be a villainess otherwise, they will be in a LOOP :v no, Bro, why can't she live a quite life, all people are afraid of her and see her like the villainess and the original FL Is just the innocent and dumb type ( like a Saint) without personality...
Chap 1, think I amde another versión. Like the Saint tried to brainwash MC but he does everything to look for the FL (she has a daugther and run away)
Chap 4, she Is a tutor, and men are trying to convince her to teach their succesors, anyway not into her
Chap 9, kinda meh, like FL has nothing special, plan personality, she Is inteligente though, MC powerful and desired... They should work More in the FL
Chap 9, I thougth it was about the chinese novel that i Watchers but doesn't seem. She Is being stabbed and not sure why she Is leading him to her family treasure when she has transmigrated to the novel, she Is not real how she Is supposed to know, also run forest run, come on, Also does not seems like there Is another MC
Chap 3, don't get it, why did she was born from an egg, and wha happened with the hair, wanted to know but don't want to continúe reading
Chap 4, they didn't explained what type of game or how did she ended up there, Also, why Is she so obsessed with the hero, got it, he Is supposed to save the world but I would not go chasing him like a dog... Anyway
Chap 3, she will end up with the 3rd Prince that did not saved btw, Also what areyou doing with your fiance, come on
Chap 12, it Is like daily life of a genius elementalist, no second characters that feel importante, hope the King Is not the MC, aunque no me sorprendería... Anyway, don't like it that much
Chap 15, the reencarnation part Is missing, More like slide of life of a divorced mistreated lady, not sure who Is the MC, the friendo or second Prince (?)
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