beta
wow. just wow. mc is outstanding in terms of survival instinct. and something about the way this story is written has us on the edge of our seats. 10/10 for now
We r was so good at the beginning then it turned boring and ended with a harem *sigh*
potential
mc's personality is constant
other character's personality is distinct
FL's cool
story have some holes, but have the right amount of mystery, dark, and gags, it's an enjoyable read.
team dynamic is funny too
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