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yeah kinda wasted my time reading this ngl
i found it because a comment said that the ML (aseph) was epicly obsessive but tbh i mostly just felt bad about his sad past and it wasn't even written well
also the FL (zay) was pretty wimpy and i just didnt rlly like her so dropped at ch 50
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yo i thought this would be interesting at the beginning but they put this in a terrible direction the story was hard to follow the characters were rlly confusing and not fleshed out and the abilities were super dumb aswell like for some reason the emperor penguin guys ice ability takes water molecules from the air but no other bird ability was explained scientifically so that was obviously only done to nerf him
also when i checked the newer chapters there is LITERALLY AI GENERATED
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this is an og fr it has been such a long time since i read this bruh i barely remember anything but the zombie protagonist thing is rlly cool unfortunately im pretty sure romance is a big genre
UPDATE : so I read up until chapter like 20 and it really is boring a lot like they could have done this so much better but the MC is only in like 30% of the chapters and it's just overall mid also I looked at the newer chapters and they look mid too which is what the comments are (CONTINUATION
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