Actual communication and character development (some). Love Fleta, sweet girl. FL is trying her best too, but is very obviously a "golden girl heroine" child who usually got her way. She's a good and flawed character though, her arrogance is addressed as well albeit indirectly and not fully. I'm not a fan of how she never turns a caring eye towards her older sister though, no matter how much a wedge has been driven between them
Omg, this is so damn interesting and cathartic. It combines a love of rofan with a love of seeing fairness in these clownass cliche rofan stories
Wouldn't say interesting plot or concept. But a very well done execution of a cliche trope and focuses more on the development of their rs and FL's fun personality
Well-executed, pretty gd, not too deep and not too shallow
Damn interesting, marinate it well; long and good
This is damn gd well written story. Everyone feels human and fallable here. The writer is great. Angsty and tear-jerking, but strangely human
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